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In the rain I stand, shivering head to toe,
Still, there is one thing you ought to know.
I barely even know you, yet I will still be there,
I am your shoulder to cry on, when you cannot bare,
The stress that lies upon your shoulders, a heavy burden for you alone,
Just know that I am here, shivering to the bone...

Chin up, feel gloomy no more,
For I am knocking 'pon your door.
I may be young and small and weak,
But I am ready to help you find what it is that you seek.
Just turn to me, I will be right beside you,
I promise I will help; all that I can do.

I may not see you, coloured and clear,
But please, do not worry, for I am always here..
Spirited away whilst I sleep, summoned to your side,
Then when I wake, and you no longer need me, I will leave you, yet I shall still be your guide...

Just remember I am here, I am your shoulder to cry on,
Leave your misery and fear behind, your mind of happiness, you must donn.
I will stand in the rain for you, on and on....
I will always be here, please do not forget,
You can come to me when you need to, I'll always be there, anyone's best bet...
©2006-2009 ~Saff06
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Author's Comments

For my newest friend on furcadia, I will always be there for her, no matter what. :hug:

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:icondelusionzofgrandeur:
:faint: (faints)
Beautifully written! Very nice, I loved every word.
You have a lot of poetic talent, a talent that I regrettably lack... lol.
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:iconle-heathy:
I freaking heart you. <3
:iconsaff06:
<3 You too ^^

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I like you... When the world is mine, your death will be quick and painless....
:iconsaff06:
Thanks ^^ I don't find my poems over wonderful, but alot of people seem to, so thanks, and maybe I'll write one for you! ^^

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I like you... When the world is mine, your death will be quick and painless....
:icondelusionzofgrandeur:
Really, if this is just one of your poems, I can't scarcely imagine how great the others are. :w00t:

:blushes: Awe shucks, if you write one for me, I'll attempt to write one for you, lol.
:iconsaff06:
x3 You don't have to write me one... I just like writing poems, it'll give me something to do. :hug:

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I like you... When the world is mine, your death will be quick and painless....

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